Monday, 16 June 2014

Flash back crash

Flashback crash!
Ah, The plane was shaking. Was my life really going to end? Bunches of black smoke were streaming out the back engine Suddenly the wing of the plane fell off plummeting straight into the murky water below.The worried voice of the captain pored through the speakers oh no not today not now.


Slowly but steadily the plane fell, “I want my money back” I shouted into the airy driving cabin but my voice just echoed around the motionless plane. Why did I ever agree to come on this horrendous trip? Everyone was talking at once it was ringing in my ears then after what felt like forever the plane started falling faster and with a BOOM it collided with the ground. Everything was dark. It was in complete silence. Ouch! A humongous grey blob hit me in the head I felt dizzy, my head was pinned onto the ground.”Help” I shouted but nobody heard me I struggled to get free but all I did was make it worse. Sweat was streaming down my face & the sun was roasting me like a turkey on thanksgiving. I lifted my weary arms & with the last of my strength I tugged off the big part of the wing and lay back exhausted and fell asleep. How was this going to end? Was I going to die or live?

By Stella Clausen.

2 comments:

  1. great story about the the storm

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  2. Excellent work Stella! Fab language, what a scary flight.

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